The Author and HIS critic

The time has come, for Brennan to get busy submitting essays for scholarships. During the Christmas break, I found an offer on fastweb that required him to write an essay, Environmental Sustanability was his topic. He has the potential to be a great writer but dislikes the task but yet enjoys the end result (go figure).
He worked on the essay for 3 or 4 days and was ready to submit his works, but not before the resident critic (that would be Barry) had checked it over.
Who will do this when he is off at UT (University of Texas Austin)?? I may have to send his dad along as the back up plan :)
Since the paper was due on the 5th they did not have time to do alot but we will see what the fruits of his labor bring forth. Hopefully the dollars will start to roll in as there will be many more essay writings to come.